This strip could have been clearer, but it would have taken a lot more wordiness. Sometimes it’s hard finding that balance.
I love the name of the falls.
Extreme sports don’t tend to entice me, so it’s fun writing someone to whom it does. I mean, one of these day’s I’d love to parachute (tandem) or to learn to hang glide, but because I think it would be beautiful and breathtaking, not because I feel there’s any risk or thrill.