I remember struggling with editing down the third panel. And still, in the end, it’s a little wordy in panel 3, but was worth it for the last panel.
Reminds me of this classic from Charles Schultz:
I know you think you believe you think you understood what you thought I said, but I’m not sure you understand that what you heard was not what I meant.
Try putting THAT on one side of a t-shirt…
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